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I am now an officially published poet!
October 01, 2013, 09:53:16 PM
Yeah :)
Last Edit: October 01, 2013, 09:53:48 PM by mrbigshot
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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 02, 2013, 01:16:31 AM
Congratulations! I read your poetry.

It is indeed very beautiful, keep up the good work!


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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 02, 2013, 06:15:11 AM
Thank you. :) I originally had the direct link to the site in this thread, but it had some personal information so i decided to edit the original thread. but i should share it with you all here. it's protected by copyright, so i have no problem sharing this poem.


You are young,

You always want to run.

feet would rather resist friction,

tugging beneath

the soles of your shoes,

than to compromise;

With resistance.

a constant battle,

throughout your youth;

You are disillusioned,

you want to travel faster,

than the sonic booms.

The electricity glistens;

You get older,

Feet start to develop

an appreciation for friction,

You gradually ease off;

The ignition,

had an epiphany

don’t need to sprint,

into the ground,

that will inevitably,

force you under.

Retrace your steps,

drawing every line in reverse,

want to reclaim youth?

It’s alluding you.

advanced so far in life

yet the waves

still succeed each other,

and the projections in the skies,

still creep until they meet their demise.

ask yourself, a paramount question,

“Why did I run so much?

when my skin was smooth,

when life didn’t feel so fragile?”

You start to notice things,

How the sun gleams

in the summertime;

how the flowers bloom,

blissfully,

An aesthetic marvel.

you utter,

It’s the process of human nature,

mathematically calculated;

into the circle of life,

but even so,

before you realize it,

your heart rapidly skips,

before you turned to dark,

so why the realization abruptly

why wait until eternal

condensation?

when trying to formulate

constellations in your head

until you realize that you are finally dead.
Last Edit: October 02, 2013, 06:16:10 AM by mrbigshot
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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 02, 2013, 06:47:27 AM

Congratulations, well done!

Keep writing  :icon_razz:
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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 02, 2013, 07:52:48 AM
Congrats!  :th_bravo:

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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 02, 2013, 03:08:29 PM
Congratulations!  :th_bravo: :multiplespotting:
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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 02, 2013, 03:27:27 PM
 :th_bravo: Congratulations! :th_bravo:

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Re: I am now an officially published poet!
October 03, 2013, 01:17:58 AM
Hoaxbook please.
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