Our Collective Song(s) for Michael (by his request;)

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Our Collective Song(s) for Michael (by his request;)

  • on: October 24, 2012, 07:18:02 AM

Hi dear Family!


 :bearhug: :bearhug:

We have barely left  few weeks going here before all our saga will be over((^^)) and I feel compelled to take a liberty and make a call to fulfill one of MJ wishes, that was voicing out by SGS character at the beginning of that journey

 -->> to make a Collective Song for Michael, that he will used later on his brilliant production.

Hope its isnt too late^)) and all of US, having such amazing minds and talents here, will surely deliver a very special gift, that will pleasing MJ creativity very much)).
I encourage ALL to participate on this project – in prose and rhyme – and the longest we may make, the better field we can give to Master for his shot...

Please, let your priceless opinion out for that and I hope we can start to laying our words All-Together for that Love/Hoax/Experience song. :compute: :ghsdf:

With L.O.V.E. and Best Wishes for ALL!

p.s.from my side, I was get strike lately  by John Ashbery mood, not sure how that may apply to a Song, may be as an introductory sort of  or a rap..
lemme make up my mind and then I post it.. too shy thought to b first one on that))

With all my Love and Good wishes to you ALL!!

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Hi dear Family!


 :bearhug: :bearhug:

We have barely left  few weeks going here before all our saga will be over((^^)) and I feel compelled to take a liberty and make a call to fulfill one of MJ wishes, that was voicing out by SGS character at the beginning of that journey

 -->> to make a Collective Song for Michael, that he will used later on his brilliant production.

Hope its isnt too late^)) and all of US, having such amazing minds and talents here, will surely deliver a very special gift, that will pleasing MJ creativity very much)).
I encourage ALL to participate on this project – in prose and rhyme – and the longest we may make, the better field we can give to Master for his shot...

Please, let your priceless opinion out for that and I hope we can start to laying our words All-Together for that Love/Hoax/Experience song. :compute: :ghsdf:

With L.O.V.E. and Best Wishes for ALL!

p.s.from my side, I was get strike lately  by John Ashbery mood, not sure how that may apply to a Song, may be as an introductory sort of  or a rap..
lemme make up my mind and then I post it.. too shy thought to b first one on that))

With all my Love and Good wishes to you ALL!!

 :moonwalk_:

Hi Skyways.. Thank you for asking me to look at this thread and discuss it and maybe give suggestions. Here are some ideas I had.. positive ones!! :)

(I don't quite know what you mean? ..but I will try to get it.. the basic concept I get, but  what shape and form are you thinking of for the song ?)
One song from multiple contributions? How long is it to be.. etc ..? It could get very confusing..

**** It would be lovely to have a song for Michael , I agree!!

Perhaps if you first started it off with your own vision of what it can be, and show  your own contribution, others can get the flavour of it?     And then others can add to it? I feel sure that there  will be some really good ideas flowing in! 

P.S. I guess it would have to be original work by all contributors, because  using established writers' words would be a breach of their copyright..also, if it is to be a song,  do you plan to record it? The copyright aspect would have to be considered .
 These are just some  basic ideas for you to think about it..I hope this helps? (I am not an expert in this field! :) ) Wishing you inspiration and many written contributions!

** I remember Michael being interviewed about his song writing.. he said something like this "Let the song write itself.."don't try to write a hit"

so to me that may mean to write "from the heart with L.O.V.E." ...and the inspiration will flow, and not to "force" yourself to write"...




It is all for L.O.V.E. x                   :compute:

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Hey skyways......

Just to let you know I have been in "thinking mode" with this....I am not sure where to start, however, it will hit me : )
Is this something that we add onto with each post....or is each posting an individual thought, just clarifying. 
Thanks for this.....it's a great, creative idea : )

Blessings Always

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THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART FOR ALL TO SUPPORT THIS IDEA FOR MJ!!  :bowdown: :moonwalk_:


Here is what I come so far --> to make it easy for Michael and us, we may post OUR Original only poem and songs as chain reaction  -
so the meaning or the last sentence on each song will continue in next one ♥^♥^♥^ and so on -->

This way we can kept be inspired by each other train of thoughts and give as much as we can  :bearhug:

I am sooo shy to make First post on that for two reasons but I will Do It 4M:  :icon_redface:

1. cant claim its "my" because its really come from above and I have feeling like it was gently guiding by helping Ashbery's hand
2. its Not really a Song , but poem(long-) in prose (we called white poem) and because its long kind of recap - I hope you all not get boring by that)))

With ALL MY LOVE, Really ❀♥★❤

one More time before I post-->
I have to say BIG Thank You for all of you guys, because YOUR Brilliance, wits, deepness and genuine emotions is really shaped it and
 IS Big part of that piece and kept me mesmerized from the beginning  -->> So, THANK YOU  :bowdown: :bowdown:

Blessings to Amazing Pablo and His Mirror --> my awe from U was my epiphany for that writing))❤

And of course all credits is go to John Ashbery because its done  on completely  Asbery's mood).


Here we go ...


MY TAKE


…a simple gesture,
Out of specific occasion and with no particular order,
Is hardly shake your world –
But it did…
Like once on a while, a hustle movement is just too swift
To let you stop at some point, and then –
The full awe of deep silent sigh   
 Strike and shock across entire Globe –
That How we collect full book
Of so-called Evidence.

It’s all Start at the beginning,
When one is dumbly stared into blunt bite of air –
Just to realize, that unblemished,
“Too much to be real” news is THERE,
And oneself – is simply wanting
and unable to wake up… From reality –
To a Reality,
Where any doubts were still too faint
To keep  us on hue with masterful hand,
That now was architecting paralleled invisible universe –
Nevertheless to say,
The recognition of  Its  long-contracted trip -
was nowhere to be found… Like deep at nighttime,
a tiny golden flare is blithely outlined peak of capstan –
We were breathing, but completely lost into darkness.

Preoccupied by mourning, anguish  and pain,
Our meandered soul was running amok
In order to keep mere sense of existence, and then –
Magically as its trap, that left us out of a blank space
In actual trick of magic , but surely deliver result, –
Suddenly, layouts of whole impossible pictures
Get somehow clear, and grounded for us
Either total believe or complete denial.
But none of  denials was firm enough to compete
With speed and complexity of newly found abundance –
 Its multiplying layers was kept over –lapsing on chasing wind
Of our  collective colossal fall… 
Yet,
There was the bottom, the frame and the measure,
That, undeniable,  picks and keeps cherry on top
Of our every steps, thoughts and cries,
And, undoubtedly, move forward those complicated arras ,
While inviting burning supporters
Into very heart of creation – a process,
That was as much hypnotic as boiling, and entail
our complete and frantic  support.

Here we have to stop, just to realize and absorb
The briefing and living energy of this veil, 
Which was bonding  together our pondering souls –
Perhaps, It was the point of his infinite affection –
A Curiosity, that kills the cat)). Yet
Here we are, fully alive and wander fiercely 
For someone, who was nowhere to be found.
Perhaps, we even sent a hug for master Dante,
So He may give us a hint how to look into Purgatory,
but master was out, and we was digging and molding
Endless pieces of broken mosaic shells, until
 Its crackles  and shapes ,finally,
deliver to us imaginary portrait
from that Gigantic ever-changing  kaleidoscope.
Bottom of this mirrored capsule is shifts
as soon as you look at it – and then,
Lost it again in the wild of perceptions,
Assumptions and try’s we just keep haunting
On the haze of newly-found reality, again...
Its capture you entire heart and soul
Like only one things may do-
Love, that holds you stronger than death,
And revives like only L.O.V.E can make it.
The question,
How it will be possible – was left out of question,
When undeniable source of  H-I-S  existence
Was located, verified, purified by our mind, and then –
Piece of Peace was accustomed and returned to us
As  fully deserved prize.

Then We set afloat our souls – and let impossible
Happening before our own eyes…
How long it was takes? No one remember right now –
Some was right “there” at the beginning,
Others not even close.. Yet,
Like in magical pointillism, all these incompleteness
Start to getting strangely completed by fluctuating spectrum,
Where angles, perspective and distance(especially)
Springs on us immediate, irrefutable, everlasting joy...

Is we able to revive our Orpheus,
Is he willing to be revived is still unknown,
But one assured side of his entities 
Is still telling us – keep, keep going
To roll the dice, keep existing in this living shroud of formation,
Keep woven into his Universal accomplishment –
Because you about to became
Immortalized like ever before…
Well, like with our own children –
Whose vitalizing youths is our best creation,
And, being slightly or completely different
From our best and worst , still,
Incontestable trace of “you” is always there.
Or like clear subtle voice of lovely horn
Floating in the mist of flawless pleasant evening and accumulates
 Precious essence of its immaculate delirium.    

To this point – we will be continue lured together
For impeccable perfections
Of HIS brilliant orchestry  and ,surely, will be missing
Each and every inch of our sailing boathouse,
When “over” became real again.




God Bless You Michael, we WILL stand by U to the end..

 
   OG.
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